Thursday, 21 March 2013

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Topic  : Negative side of marriage during the period of collage       

Marriage during period of collage has become an increasingly important topic in academic recently. Collegian, especially for women are interested having legal relationship as in marriage. They have good intention in their relationship that is to help them in a better life. They wish it may have a wide range of benefits, including improvements in economic, mental and physical health, and it can be a way to avoid bad relationship.  However, during the process of their relationship, it can be worse as they don’t think deeply before deciding to get married in their age. Unfortunately, they get some problems worse than the benefits they get in the beginning such as disturb their time in study, easy to divorced, and have high risk for the mental health.
Marriage for collegian can bring them to be busier than single person. They have to separate their time to study and manage their family. For husband, it leads to a significant decline in the level of quantity and quality of physical activity. It because of people inclined to concentrate to the one thing. Husband has to be more active working and take care of the wife while they are obligated to study in university. For the wife has to take care of the husband, home, even baby and her study. As a result, they do not concentrate in their family and studying and it can deliver to the divorcing.
Divorcing risk for them is very easy happened. It because of they are not ready to face the responsibilities that must be done as an adult. If we married in young age, we must be ready to face any problems in family life such as economic problems, couple problems, and also child problem. It is fact that young age has high egoism, they could not aware for their responsibility to divide their life. Besides, they have to be able to keep their couple during their time in friendship. As we think sometimes it can make their couple jealous.  It brings to disharmony in their relationship.
One important concern is for their future in which marriage may influence a person’s mental health is through its effect on problems in their relationship. When they have problem with their couple, they become very annoyed to do everything. It makes them in bad condition of mental that is stress. Divorcing is the highest problem as it can bring person who has been married has bad depression. As a result, they could not safe their relationship and their study.
In short, marriage during the period of collage gives worse effect the collegian’s life rather than the benefits that is given. For example, disturb their study, easier divorced, and bad mentality. And in the last, they are regretful of their decision to marry in young age.







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